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*Penbl* Author: bermanrl          [Feb 20, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Fantasy :: Folklore
*Penr* Details: Some of the best storylines can be found in the folklore, legends, and ghosts that live around us.
This is a twisted tale of a critter with a blue tail. The tale wants an imaginative reader. Enjoy.
  [Short Story]

 The Skink King  (ASR)
A warped and twisted interpretation of a Grimm tale.
#2112704 by bermanrl

*Penbl* Author: Sarah Rae          [Feb 20, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Young Adult :: Fantasy :: Romance/Love
*Penr* Details: I recently uncovered this older writing and I'm planning to dig in and finish it. Feedback before I get too far would be greatly appreciated!

 The Dancing Curse - Part 1  (ASR)
The war ends, but Cara's dreams of a bright future are dashed when she learns the price
#2112845 by Sarah Rae

*Penbl* Author: Dutchy          [Feb 19, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Nature :: None :: None
*Penr* Details: Any and all feedback welcome and appreciated.

 River Rock  (E)
The inevitable passage of time for us is fleeting - for the rock- time is forever
#2112779 by Dutchy

*Penbl* Author: Poeros          [Feb 19, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Death :: Paranormal
*Penr* Details: Trying to write something from the mind of a predator, but not from the vampire point of view. Looking for general feedback or suggestions. Any are welcome and well rewarded with GP :)

 Predator among Us  (18+)
A predator moves among the human's, but this one is welcomed in it's hunt.
#2112795 by Poeros

*Penbl* Author: Milo Prevo          [Feb 19, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Supernatural
*Penr* Details: My first chapter. Any feedback welcome. Thank you.

 Unwanted adventure: Chapter 1 Beginnings  (13+)
Gayle is a sorcerer caught in a war between two kingdoms while trying to find acceptance.
#2112733 by Milo Prevo

*Penbl* Author: Apologizing Adolescent          [Feb 18, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Experience :: Emotional :: None
*Penr* Details: please review

 I Don't Know What It's Like  (E)
you know... the feeling
#2112734 by Apologizing Adolescent

*Penbl* Author: RisanF          [Feb 18, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Young Adult :: Friendship :: Romance/Love
*Penr* Details: Looking for reviews on my revised novella (story and characters). WILL RETURN REVIEWS for each chapter.

Different and Cool (2017)  (13+)
Andrew Champion is given a special project, partnered with the geekiest girl in school
#2112713 by RisanF

*Penbl* Author: Chasing Grace          [Feb 18, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Drama :: Inspirational :: Other
*Penr* Details: Any thoughts are appreciated. I have edited this, after requesting an earlier review. I am planning on expanding this to a bigger piece. Thank you in advance!

 A Petulant Life  (E)
Violet lived life on the edge... No one would get the best her... no one except herself..
#2096571 by Chasing Grace

*Penbl* Author: K.HBey          [Feb 18, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Emotional :: Dark
*Penr* Details: I am always pleased to know what impressions get others about my writing.Indeed I am looking for a honest and an objective review.I think strongly that someone needs to situate the work according to and among others.The purpose is to promote my writing.

You are still in my spirit  (18+)
Obsessional love, unforgotten and inspiring fidelity even the deep suffering sad feelings
#2112246 by K.HBey

*Penbl* Author: taylor paape          [Feb 18, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Experience :: Biographical :: None
*Penr* Details: Looking for reviews

 God's Mistake  (13+)
He thinks about his lonely past
#1360014 by taylor paape

*Penbl* Author: Leslie Loo          [Feb 17, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Comedy :: Romance/Love
*Penr* Details: This story is for a contest, so please give some helpful, honest feedback. It would be very appreciated. Also, I need some suggestions on the title. Thank you!

I Love You, Darnell!  (13+)
A contest entry for The Dialogue 500
#2112613 by Leslie Loo

*Penbl* Author: Daniel Curry          [Feb 17, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Drama :: Romance/Love :: Tragedy
*Penr* Details: Need some motivation to finish this one, and so any critique / review would be much appreciated. Thanks in advance.

Viewfinder  (13+)
If you can feel it, who cares if it's real or not?
#2065921 by Daniel Curry

*Penbl* Author: Grayson Moon          [Feb 16, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense :: Young Adult :: Psychology
*Penr* Details: Any and all reviews are appreciated.

Rune: Chapter 1  (13+)
Olivia, her brother, and father are caught in an accident. Or is it an accident?
#2112086 by Grayson Moon

*Penbl* Author: Apologizing Adolescent          [Feb 16, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Dark :: Emotional
*Penr* Details: I wrote this in a short amount of time (ohh lmao)

 Time  (E)
A man has been framed for a crime
#2112454 by Apologizing Adolescent

*Penbl* Author: Lisa Angelo          [Feb 15, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi :: Action/Adventure
*Penr* Details: Looking for feedback on clarity and pacing. Thanks!
  [Short Story]

The Hope Tree  (E)
A bit post-apocalyptic, a bit fantasy, a tiny bit sci-fi...
#2112377 by Lisa Angelo

*Penbl* Author: Fifthwood          [Feb 15, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Sci-fi :: Other
*Penr* Details: Any feedback will help. Thank you. I pay lots of GPs.
  [Short Story]

Corporate Wars: Retrieval  (18+)
John Carrio must retrieve the data that was stolen during his last job.
#2104153 by Fifthwood

*Penbl* Author: Boogie15          [Feb 14, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: This is just a little prologue/first chapter of a short story I've been working on. Want any type of general feedback and to know whether or not you guys would read more. Thanks!
  [Short Story]

 Isolation   (13+)
First half of a short story. Thoughts??Would you guys read more? Thanks!
#2112270 by Boogie15

*Penbl* Author: Perhaps          [Feb 14, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Mythology :: Inspirational :: Community
*Penr* Details: The mind can make heaven of hell, or hell of heaven.

 Insert title here  (E)
Free your mind
#2105379 by Perhaps

*Penbl* Author: Perhaps          [Feb 14, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Community :: Cultural :: History
*Penr* Details: You will not be disappointed...

 Serpent lies...  (E)
How do you begin to explain something so reality shattering?
#2110735 by Perhaps

*Penbl* Author: A. N. Craddock          [Feb 13, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Romance/Love :: Supernatural
*Penr* Details: I'm looking for serious reviews on this (did it make sense without reading the prologue, what did you think of the pacing, what was your overall opinion, etc). This is a rough draft, so please ignore any spelling or grammar mistakes.

 Grim : Chapter 1  (13+)
Rayne learns who ordered her capture.
#2112166 by A. N. Craddock

*Penbl* Author: Emvy          [Feb 12, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Emotional :: Sci-fi :: Death
*Penr* Details: I'm looking for feedback on 1) If you felt a connection to the main character or cared about her and 2) If the major incident happened too quickly. My original conception took the idea further, but I decided to try this minimal approach first.
  [Short Story]

 Emotional Response  (13+)
Reina's heart is broken when she sees something horrible happen to her crush.
#2112101 by Emvy

*Penbl* Author: PureSciFiPlus - Happy Feb 14          [Feb 12, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Inspirational :: Thriller/Suspense :: Drama
*Penr* Details: I don't think I have any missing words, punctuation errors. or misspelled words. But if I do I need to know about them before I enter this contest. GPs rewarded for each review.
  [Short Story]

 Falling Down, Standing Up  (18+)
Most rain you can drive through without anything happening. This storm isn't one of them.
#2112094 by PureSciFiPlus - Happy Feb 14

*Penbl* Author: MysteryBox          [Feb 12, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Action/Adventure :: Sci-fi
*Penr* Details: Any feedback would be appreciated. I'm not sure where I'm taking this story yet, but Id love to hear your thoughts.

Attack of the Invisible Aliens! - Ch. 1  (13+)
A group of survivors hide out in an deserted school building.
#2112014 by MysteryBox

*Penbl* Author: A. N. Craddock          [Feb 10, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Romance/Love :: Supernatural
*Penr* Details: I did the thing that shouldn't be done and kept going back to this, so now I'm numb to it. Honest and helpful opinions needed! Please disregard grammar and spelling mistakes. I'll take care of those later!

 Grim : Prologue (Rewrite)  (13+)
Koien finds a sketchbook.
#2111809 by A. N. Craddock

*Penbl* Author: ParadoX          [Feb 9, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Entertainment :: Other
*Penr* Details: Looking for proofreading help. Also considering an alternate ending in which the protagonist dies. Any advice is welcome.
  [Short Story]

 Unkind Weather  (E)
A man stumbles into an unfamiliar world
#2111646 by ParadoX

*Penbl* Author: SoldierBoy          [Feb 8, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Tragedy :: Crime/Gangster
*Penr* Details: I don't like zombie stories or movies, But this one insisted on being written, It's not particularly scary. The end is left hanging but I'm not sure if there is anywhere else for it to go. I was trying to build some charactersm scenery and dialogue.
  [Short Story]

 One of our zombies is missing  (13+)
Not like any zombie story you have ever seen
#2108734 by SoldierBoy

*Penbl* Author: Rmkv          [Feb 8, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Young Adult :: Other
*Penr* Details: Is this something you'd want to read more of? What about it appeals the most, and the least? Thank you in advance!
  [Short Story]

 Princess Diaries  (E)
The musings of a princess locked up in a tower
#2111494 by Rmkv

*Penbl* Author: Talia Drake          [Feb 8, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Young Adult
*Penr* Details: This is the first chapter of my novel, which is still very much in progress. I'd love some feedback to see if I'm on the right track. My prologue to this is also in my portfolio, if interested. You can ignore spelling and grammar.

 The Angel's Locket - Chapter 1  (E)
Talia and Casey find a note from their Dad.
#2111483 by Talia Drake

*Penbl* Author: willy          [Feb 8, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Comedy :: Drama
*Penr* Details: I've had another play with this. What do you think?
  [Short Story]

 Three Little Words And The Candy Man  (18+)
A chance meeting results in bliss, set in 2030 - I wanted to try a dialogue only piece.
#2111090 by willy

*Penbl* Author: Kain Highwind          [Feb 7, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure
*Penr* Details: Just looking for any opinions. Thanks in advance.

 The Star of Adam (Chapter 1)  (18+)
Visions of Chaos and Dreams for the Future
#2106578 by Kain Highwind

*Penbl* Author: Robert Rene          [Feb 7, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Friendship :: Emotional
*Penr* Details: Feel free to be as honest as you like.

 Dark Tears  (E)
#2111408 by Robert Rene

*Penbl* Author: ExChad          [Feb 7, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Paranormal :: Teen :: Action/Adventure
*Penr* Details: Any feed back would be helpful.

 Prologue: The Pressure  (E)
This is a prologue to a potential series about a group of empowered teens living in hiding
#2109149 by ExChad

*Penbl* Author: Bruce.          [Feb 7, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Thriller/Suspense :: Other
*Penr* Details: Anne and Monica share a chapter.

 My Mate Monica. Ch 7.  (18+)
Dave makes his planned move on Anne.
#1981530 by Bruce.

*Penbl* Author: Fifthwood          [Feb 6, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Supernatural :: Fantasy :: Dark
*Penr* Details: Would love any feedback. I pay well.

The Hunted -- Chp. 1  (18+)
On a hunting trip a senator discovers a hunter of legend.
#2108179 by Fifthwood

*Penbl* Author: Rmkv          [Feb 6, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Relationship :: Nonsense :: Fanfiction
*Penr* Details: Based on something that has always made me smile. Wrote it really long back with a self imposed word limit of 500. But I think that has contributed to a certain jerkiness in the story. Please do comment. :)
  [Short Story]

 Etched in time  (E)
A love story like no other
#2111315 by Rmkv

*Penbl* Author: Listener70          [Feb 6, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Experience :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: Waking up, at least some days.

Chaos Awakening  (E)
Some mornings are just difficult.
#2093584 by Listener70

*Penbl* Author: Robert Edward Baker          [Feb 5, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Relationship :: Gay/Lesbian
*Penr* Details: This is a brief, relationship/love story that involves members of minority groups. I'm particularly interested to know if anything I've written is either offensive or implausible or both. Thank you! Bob :D
  [Short Story]

The Librarian  (18+)
Jess believes she's stumbled upon her soulmate in the library - for Quotation Inspiration.
#2111103 by Robert Edward Baker

*Penbl* Author: Chowtyme          [Feb 4, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Comedy :: Drama :: Animal
*Penr* Details: Looking for some feedback on this short piece. Impressions, suggestions, and comments all welcomed and appreciated!
  [Short Story]

The Persistent Mr. Monroe  (13+)
Between predator and pray as the Sunday go-to-meetin' crowd watches on.
#2109656 by Chowtyme

*Penbl* Author: Whitemorn          [Feb 3, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Comedy :: Death :: Entertainment
*Penr* Details: A little humor at the expense of you zombies. This will mean more to my zombie readers. Zombie GP's offered. ;)

The Top 13 Must Have List for Zombies  (13+)
A short comedic piece for your entertainment, (or not)?
#2111012 by Whitemorn

*Penbl* Author: Someone          [Feb 3, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Emotional :: Psychology :: Dark
*Penr* Details: Something or ever that came out in a rap-like fashion. I know there is a particular mistake somewhere but can't find it... regardless... give thoughts! ^^

Bright Blue Day  (E)
To be read quickly, in a rap-like fashion... I don't even know what happened with this.
#2110720 by Someone

*Penbl* Author: Whitemorn          [Feb 3, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Dark :: Melodrama
*Penr* Details: I'm back on the block after a long winter's nap. This is a classically written story poem, a horror story so cover your eyes as you read. :D GP's rewarded. :)

Plight of The Author  (13+)
A poem about a writer's error in judgement.
#2110986 by Whitemorn

*Penbl* Author: BBK          [Feb 3, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Inspirational :: Relationship
*Penr* Details: Does the story retain your interest till the end?
What you liked the most/least?
How are the characters and the dialogues defined?
How is the flow/pace?
Please highlight grammatical errors, if any.
Do you feel it is contest material?
  [Short Story]

Unrequited Affection  (E)
Short story about a girl's victory over her pain and suffering, based on true life events
#2110778 by BBK

*Penbl* Author: dizzydreamer          [Feb 3, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Emotional :: Personal :: Other
*Penr* Details: A poem I've just written. Please let me know what you think. I'm aware that the rhyming pattern isn't constant; that's something I usually play around with.

 Untouched  (E)
A short poem about the inescapable mark of time
#2110958 by dizzydreamer

*Penbl* Author: Idle Muser          [Feb 2, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Drama :: Dark :: Young Adult
*Penr* Details: A constructive criticism on how this short story could be improved is much appreciated. Be it the narration, or the dialogues, or the flow, or anything that you can possibly think of.

 A 'Perfect' moment. What is it?  (13+)
There is nothing like a Perfect moment. There always is a moment, only you make it Perfect
#2105501 by Idle Muser

*Penbl* Author: Johnny O          [Feb 1, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Experience :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: I would appreciate some feedback, thanks

 Echoes of silence  (E)
The path of being a volunteer sometimes is tough.
#2077770 by Johnny O

*Penbl* Author: Pernell Rogers          [Feb 1, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Horror/Scary :: Nature
*Penr* Details: Be brutally honest. I feel the first part is stronger than the second part. Thankx.
  [Short Story]

 They Shouldn't Be Here...Short Story  (13+)
What happens to Mother Nature when technology fails?
#2110336 by Pernell Rogers

*Penbl* Author: Bruce.          [Feb 1, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Emotional :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: A fictional view.

 Just Go  (18+)
Goodbye and good riddance. I'll get along fine without you. Fiction.
#2109501 by Bruce.

*Penbl* Author: Idle Muser          [Feb 1, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Personal :: Young Adult :: Writing
*Penr* Details: Please review this piece, focusing not much on the content, but on writing-style and narration.

 Am I freaking out?  (E)
Please review this piece, mostly on the basis of my writing-style and narration.
#2110597 by Idle Muser

*Penbl* Author: Miranduhh          [Jan 31, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Writing :: Relationship :: Emotional
*Penr* Details: I would love constructive feedback on this item. What could be better? I can't pinpoint what it could be. Thank you!

Bloom  (E)
Gain and loss.
#2075904 by Miranduhh

*Penbl* Author: Poeros          [Jan 30, 2017]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy :: Supernatural
*Penr* Details: I got very excited about a concept and it just flowed out my fingers. I wanted to share it and see what others thought of it so far before putting more effort into it.

The Unchosen (draft)  (18+)
A god has chosen him at long last, but is it the one he wants?
#2110575 by Poeros

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